(I wrote this short story in third grade as a sequel to a book I read called Sarah Plain and Tall. There are historical inaccuracies and grammatical errors, but this is a very complex plot line for a third grader to write. I really am in love with my writing style when I was 8! Actually, I’m in love with everything I’ve written. My writing style is awesome no matter how old I am!)
In Kansas in 1901, there was a house. Inside it was a bunch of very busy people. Even though it was a very small house it would fit four people and one cat named Seal.
The people in the house were Sarah, Jacob, Anna, and Caleb. Everybody was bustling about doing chores. Anna and Sarah were washing the dishes and Jacob was teaching Caleb how to cut small trees down. Anna was twelve and Caleb was seven.
Inside the house while Anna and Sarah were washing dishes, they were remembering the first time Sarah came to see if she would like to stay. Many surprising things happened while she stayed.
Anna and Caleb learned to swim in the cow pond. And Sarah met sheep and was sorry when one died. There was also a hurricane that hit. And Sarah learned to drive a wagon. Last year Sarah also got married to Jacob.
“Sarah, are you always going to stay with us?” asked Anna. “Why yes Anna, I love your papa. And he loves me. I do not want to part with him,” said Sarah.
Then they went back to washing the dishes. Back outside while Jacob and Caleb were cutting down trees they were talking also.
“Daddy, when will we ever go see Maggie’s baby?” said Caleb. “You will get to see her kid because it is not a baby anymore. It is one years old,” said Jacob.
Speaking of Maggie, there is a story about her. You see, she was pregnant when Sarah met her. Well, one day Maggie’s husband rode on his horse and rushed over to Jacob’s house.
He told them that Maggie was struggling and trying to squeeze her baby out. But she was having trouble doing it.
So they ran over to her house. When they got in the house, Sarah rushed into Maggie’s room.
She was struggling to much that she fainted when the baby came out. It was a girl.
“I remember the story of how Maggie got her baby by heart,” said Caleb. As I was saying, Caleb had done a good job cutting down trees. Jacob said so.
Inside the house the girls had finished doing the chores and they were petting Seal.
They told about the hurricane and that they couldn’t find Seal. Then after the storm they found her on the roof.
The next day they drove over to Maggie’s house. When they arrived, Maggie and her child in her arms came to greet them. “It’s nice to see you again and I have named by baby Abigail,” said Maggie.
“That is a pretty name for a baby,” said Sarah. “Her first word was Sarah,” said Maggie. Sarah smiled happily at Abigail.
Then Maggie led them inside. It was as plain as it was at Jacob’s house.
After they sat down they talked and talked until it was time to go. “Goodbye Maggie!” said Anna. “We’ll see you later.” Maggie waved Abigail’s hand to act like she was waving goodbye. Maggie waved also.
Then they started off. When they arrived at their house they looked at the calendar. “Oh my!” said Sarah. “Tomorrow is Maggie’s birthday.” “We should make her a card and a present!” said Anna.
The next day at Sarah’s house everyone was busy making a present and card for Maggie. When everybody was finished they put their cards and presents and set off for Maggie’s house.
When they got there Jacob went up to the porch alone and rang the doorbell. Sarah, Anna, and Caleb hid in the wagon waiting for Maggie.
When Maggie’s husband answered the door Jacob said, “Hello this is Jacob. Here is my birthday present and card.” “Where are the rest of the gang?” said Maggie’s husband. “We are here!” said Sarah, Anna, and Caleb. They climbed out of the wagon. And they ran up the porch. Then Maggie’s husband opened the door and yelled for Maggie. When she answered the door everyone yelled, “Surprise!” “Oh thank you very much!” said Maggie.
“Your welcome,” said Jacob, Sarah, Anna, and Caleb. “Well we have to go now,” said Jacob. So they climbed up in the wagon.
When they arrived home they had a surprise. They found Seal and a milk snake both dead. “Oh no, not Seal!” said Sarah running toward Seal and the snake. “The snake must have bit Seal and they fought,” said Caleb. “I guess that we should have a funeral for Seal,” said Sarah.
At the funeral it was very sad. Everybody said nice things about Seal. At the end of the funeral Sarah cried so hard that she almost burst. Then Jacob dug a hole and droped Seal down it. That was the end of the funeral.
A week passed. Everybody forgot about Seal. Then one day Jacob offered Sarah that he could buy her a new pet.
But Sarah refused.
Then a month passed. That day was Caleb’s birthday. He was so exited. He was jumping all around. “I can’t believe it is my birthday!” said Caleb.
Suddenly Sarah came into the room. She gave Caleb a present. It was a Conch Shell. And written on it was a note that said “We are celebrating our birthdays together.”
“We are celebrating our birthdays together? Wow!” said Caleb.
“Why don’t we give him the rest of our presents,” said Jacob handing him two wrapped things. “May I open them?” asked Caleb. “You will open them last,” said Jacob.
So he started ripping the presents open. The first one was clothes. The second one was a book of fairy tales. And the last present was a crystal angel that held a sign that said “You are the best son I ever had.”
“Thank you for all of the presents,” said Caleb. “You are welcome,” said Jacob, Sarah, and Anna. Then there was a knock on the screen door. “I will get it,” said Anna. “It might be some friends.”
When she opened the door it was Maggie, her baby Abigail, and the twins. “Hello Anna, we have something to give Caleb for his birthday,” said Maggie.
So Anna let Maggie’s twins, Abigail, and Maggie herself in. When Maggie came in she gave Caleb a wrapped present.
“I wonder what it is, ” said Caleb. When he opened it up, he couldn’t figure out what it was. “It’s a scrapbook,” said Maggie. “What is a scrapbook?’ said Caleb.
“It is something you write or draw on,” said Sarah. “There is a pencil in there too,” said Maggie. So Caleb fished out a pencil and drew furiously stopping to look at Sarah now and then.
When he finished drawing he held up the drawing so everyone could see.
Sarah smiled at Caleb. “Thank you for drawing a picture of me. I feel that you might be an artist one day,” said Sarah.
“Oh my, look at the time we better go now!” said Maggie. “Goodbye Caleb,” said the twins. And they started off.
“This is my best birthday ever,” said Caleb. “You have said that every birthday you have had,” said Anna. “Well, this is my best birthday I ever had,” said Caleb.
After another few weeks Jacob offered to get Sarah another pet. This time she did not refuse. “I want a grey girl cat and I will name her Seal,” said Sarah.
So Jacob set off to go to the pet store so he could get Sarah a new cat. When he got there he asked, “Do you have any grey cats here?”
“You are very lucky because we have one more left,” said the store manager.
“Where is it?” said Jacob excitedly. “Right around the corner,” said the store manager. So Jacob ran around the corner. He gazed around in amusement.
It was cat city! There were cats everywhere. Then he spotted a little grey cat. He picked it out of the cage. It was so cute.
“I am going to take you home to Sarah,” said Jacob. Then he went to the cash register.
When he got to the cash register he put the cat on the counter for the pet doctor could inspect the cat.
“You have a very smart and healthy cat there,” said the doctor. That was after he paid for the cat.
As soon as he came back to his house, of course he surprised Sarah. “Oh isn’t she cute!” said Sarah.
The cat purred and layed down on Sarah’s lap.
“Jacob, thank you very much for this cat. I am going to name her Pepper,” said Sarah. “You are very welcome,” said Jacob.
Days turned into weeks. Weeks turned into months. Sarah kept getting fatter. “Did you eat too much?” said Caleb.
“No I did not, it is just that I am pregnant,” said Sarah. “I will try to remember that you are pregnant,” said Caleb.
Just then Sarah heard people singing happy birthday to the twins.
Sarah rushed on her coat. “Come on we have to say happy birthday to the twins,” said Sarah. So the rest of the family rushed their coats on and ran out the door.
When they arrived at Maggie’s house they went up to the front door and knocked. When Maggie came to the door everyone explained why they were sad.
“We are said because we didn’t get the twins a present,” said Caleb.
“Ohh that is okay, they don’t care if they get a present or not,” said Maggie. “We came by to say happy birthday to the twins,” said Anna. “I guess you can say happy birthday and give them a present anyway,” said Maggie.
(I wrote “To be continued…” at the bottom of the final page of the story, but I never actually finished it. I can’t believe how long of a short story that was for an 8 year-old to write! Then again, I’ve always been a writer. I’ve been known to take prompts and then go way beyond what people ask for. This was a really cute story! It makes me want to write a new one soon!)
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